Fatal Optimization: Chapter 18 by KayinStorm, literature
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Fatal Optimization: Chapter 18
Incognito slogged over to the transport. His feet were cold, his vision was blurry. He was tired, and he stank horribly. He stumbled inside, dropped the remains of his weapon by his seat and collapsed into it. Almost immediately, sleep took him.
In his dreams, he replayed the events preceding today's mission. It had been such a short amount of time...
They got into the transport waiting for them in the tunnels underneath Sanctuary. Irian hefted his case across the gap and looked for a seat. There were plenty. He turned back to Ouray.
"Are we it?"
His new mentor turned. "For the moment, yes. We have another stop to make."
He set
Fatal Optimization: Intro by KayinStorm, literature
Literature
Fatal Optimization: Intro
Show and Tell
He wasnt sure what it was, but it was pretty. It was blue, shiny, and felt warm. When it got dark, where the trees were over the path, it glowed. He was sure his parents would want to see what he had found in the woods, and he was sure it was important. His little legs carried him ever faster towards home.
They say the Natives drove off another expedition of our boys, dear
Maybe theyll learn that they have a country, and to leave that one to them. At that, the door slammed open. A short, red-haired child charged in, half-carrying half-dragging a long, sparkly blue object. It wa
Fatal Optimization Chapter 17 by KayinStorm, literature
Literature
Fatal Optimization Chapter 17
Chapter 17
The way forward was dark, dirty, wet, and smelled pretty bad.
The way back wasnt any better.
Whats this again?
The Cloaca Maxima. Oldest sewer known.
It stinks.
It IS a sewer.
From behind them, a voice cut through the stench. Night, Incognito, knock it off.
They trudged on in silence.
Night stopped. Her loose hair fell around her face in ebon sheaves. Whats that smell?
Im betting thats our mark.
The same voice, again. The walls have ears, you know.
They apparently have assholes, too.
Fatal Optimization: Chapter 16 by KayinStorm, literature
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Fatal Optimization: Chapter 16
Chapter 16
Irian stared into the case. These were the people he had trained his whole life to join, never truly believing himself good enough, and here was his invitation, carved in wood and sitting on his foot. He was a bit shocked. Tenshu was slowly divesting himself of the tea ceremony persona, and was watching his student in great interest.
However, a knock at the door startled irian, and Tenshu quickly put his tea face back on.
Enter.
At the door appeared a face Irian had not seen in more than a year. Sticks and his younger sister stood in the doorway, removed their geta, and stepped into the tea room. They bowed
Irian's Homework-Chapter 15 by KayinStorm, literature
Literature
Irian's Homework-Chapter 15
Aether Blades: Theory and Application in Better Blade Design
Aether Theory
Irian Pendreic
To begin, let us state the problems experienced till this present time in Aetheric s, namely that of producing much larger vitrified aether components than the two facings that make an aether dagger. These two facings are then bonded with either an epoxy or welded to the dagger hilt, allowing a tool to be made from the two near paper-thin aether forgings. Welded designs are more stable, but tend to destroy as many aether facings as they attach. The aether is still unstable at temperatures required to weld it. Because of this problem, as well as
Fatal Optimization: Chapter 14 by KayinStorm, literature
Literature
Fatal Optimization: Chapter 14
Chapter 14
It was dark.
It was dark, there was no light, there was only dark and pain and I couldnt tell how long it went on and it couldnt get any worse and how do I make it stop.
He should have been asleep, but he wasnt. The needle in his arm scratched (or was it itched, he couldnt remember) and he was uncomfortable. The chair was tilted, he thought, or was he lying down? His body was so far away.
Suddenly, the pain stopped. Hariel opened his eyes. Light hurt. Light hurt a lot. He regarded his surroundings. He didnt know where inSanctuary he was, if he was even there at all
Fatal Optimization Chapter 13 by KayinStorm, literature
Literature
Fatal Optimization Chapter 13
Chapter 13
Irian turned to the water. It all made sense. He had noticed nothing was nibbling at him, and normally even with him smacking the water his friends caught more fish than a single hypostomus
Let me see your fish. I have an idea. Irian looked at the skewered fish. There were no odontodes of any kind, and it was impossible to tell the sex of the fish. It was a juvenile, and then he saw the thing that made his blood stop, freeze and run backwards. Underneath it, instead of a full belly, there were the remains of a yolk sac. The bait in its mouth had been its first meal. It would appear we have a g
Fatal Optimization: Chapter 18 by KayinStorm, literature
Literature
Fatal Optimization: Chapter 18
Incognito slogged over to the transport. His feet were cold, his vision was blurry. He was tired, and he stank horribly. He stumbled inside, dropped the remains of his weapon by his seat and collapsed into it. Almost immediately, sleep took him.
In his dreams, he replayed the events preceding today's mission. It had been such a short amount of time...
They got into the transport waiting for them in the tunnels underneath Sanctuary. Irian hefted his case across the gap and looked for a seat. There were plenty. He turned back to Ouray.
"Are we it?"
His new mentor turned. "For the moment, yes. We have another stop to make."
He set
Fatal Optimization: Intro by KayinStorm, literature
Literature
Fatal Optimization: Intro
Show and Tell
He wasnt sure what it was, but it was pretty. It was blue, shiny, and felt warm. When it got dark, where the trees were over the path, it glowed. He was sure his parents would want to see what he had found in the woods, and he was sure it was important. His little legs carried him ever faster towards home.
They say the Natives drove off another expedition of our boys, dear
Maybe theyll learn that they have a country, and to leave that one to them. At that, the door slammed open. A short, red-haired child charged in, half-carrying half-dragging a long, sparkly blue object. It wa
Fatal Optimization Chapter 17 by KayinStorm, literature
Literature
Fatal Optimization Chapter 17
Chapter 17
The way forward was dark, dirty, wet, and smelled pretty bad.
The way back wasnt any better.
Whats this again?
The Cloaca Maxima. Oldest sewer known.
It stinks.
It IS a sewer.
From behind them, a voice cut through the stench. Night, Incognito, knock it off.
They trudged on in silence.
Night stopped. Her loose hair fell around her face in ebon sheaves. Whats that smell?
Im betting thats our mark.
The same voice, again. The walls have ears, you know.
They apparently have assholes, too.
Fatal Optimization: Chapter 16 by KayinStorm, literature
Literature
Fatal Optimization: Chapter 16
Chapter 16
Irian stared into the case. These were the people he had trained his whole life to join, never truly believing himself good enough, and here was his invitation, carved in wood and sitting on his foot. He was a bit shocked. Tenshu was slowly divesting himself of the tea ceremony persona, and was watching his student in great interest.
However, a knock at the door startled irian, and Tenshu quickly put his tea face back on.
Enter.
At the door appeared a face Irian had not seen in more than a year. Sticks and his younger sister stood in the doorway, removed their geta, and stepped into the tea room. They bowed
Irian's Homework-Chapter 15 by KayinStorm, literature
Literature
Irian's Homework-Chapter 15
Aether Blades: Theory and Application in Better Blade Design
Aether Theory
Irian Pendreic
To begin, let us state the problems experienced till this present time in Aetheric s, namely that of producing much larger vitrified aether components than the two facings that make an aether dagger. These two facings are then bonded with either an epoxy or welded to the dagger hilt, allowing a tool to be made from the two near paper-thin aether forgings. Welded designs are more stable, but tend to destroy as many aether facings as they attach. The aether is still unstable at temperatures required to weld it. Because of this problem, as well as
Fatal Optimization: Chapter 14 by KayinStorm, literature
Literature
Fatal Optimization: Chapter 14
Chapter 14
It was dark.
It was dark, there was no light, there was only dark and pain and I couldnt tell how long it went on and it couldnt get any worse and how do I make it stop.
He should have been asleep, but he wasnt. The needle in his arm scratched (or was it itched, he couldnt remember) and he was uncomfortable. The chair was tilted, he thought, or was he lying down? His body was so far away.
Suddenly, the pain stopped. Hariel opened his eyes. Light hurt. Light hurt a lot. He regarded his surroundings. He didnt know where inSanctuary he was, if he was even there at all
Fatal Optimization Chapter 13 by KayinStorm, literature
Literature
Fatal Optimization Chapter 13
Chapter 13
Irian turned to the water. It all made sense. He had noticed nothing was nibbling at him, and normally even with him smacking the water his friends caught more fish than a single hypostomus
Let me see your fish. I have an idea. Irian looked at the skewered fish. There were no odontodes of any kind, and it was impossible to tell the sex of the fish. It was a juvenile, and then he saw the thing that made his blood stop, freeze and run backwards. Underneath it, instead of a full belly, there were the remains of a yolk sac. The bait in its mouth had been its first meal. It would appear we have a g
Planning to restructure Fatal Optimization. May add more background to the beginning. Otherwise, I'll break here and explain to this point in history.
Well, good things so far...I've started school @ ITT. Studying to be a Game Designer. Things are going well. Sadly, I'm still in between jobs and everything, but I'm not giving up. So how have you been? You and your lady still hangin in there?